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November 29th, 2007 · 1 Comment
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Today, gun is one of the methods for self defense but many crimes by guns have been occurred. Because of many different reasons people who live in
U.S. buy guns easily. Some people say that owning gun is kind of right problem and the other people say that gun should be controlled by strong law of government. Then, how become is it controversy topic as decide president or senator. Sometimes, gun control topic used to be an election pledge and it still face up. Having guns is an old culture of
U.S. Even half percentage of adult men has guns in their homes. Some people say having a gun is right for protecting them selves. Though people know it is a serious problem that many people have guns. Also U.S. has a high rate of murder which is more than 2 times of
Korea, There are a lot of conflicts between students and they murder. In
Korea, we have many fights but not murder. And most suicide is from guns in U.S. Guns make people’s heart vicious. I think guns are calling blood. I do not think guns don’t have any good affects on people. U.S. should not allow owning guns, so
U.S. students can be safe. I convince that gun should be controlled by strict law because of four reasons that it leads to decrease many kinds of crimes by gun, stop gun accidents, prevent using gun in wrong hand, and gun is kind of very dangerous weapon.First, opponents claim that gun is the best method to protect them. It is very easy to use and small enough to carry; moreover it can kill people by just fingertip. However, we should think that the gun which can kill people easily can be owned by criminals. Even though people want to own the gun to protect them, it can give better chance and motive to criminal. It is obvious that criminals want to use gun to their crime as much as people who want to protect them. According to blahblah, the countries which allow owning gun have higher crime rate. Therefore, owning gun should be illegal and controlled except police man whose job is protecting people.Secondly, many people who believe that gun control should be abolished think that using gun is not that hard so people can use them with little careful. However, let’s think that how police men learn and practice a lot before they are using real gun. To be a police man, they need to familiar with gun from practice and know exact methods before using. Also, the rate of fatal gun accident from children is skyrocketed in
United States. From these example, people who think that gun is easy to use is quite wrong indiscreet use of gun causes fatal gun accident involving children. Accident causes include children playing with guns and negligent manufacturing.Third, guns can be used in the wrong hands.Fourth, Guns are so complex that special training is necessary to use them properly.In my conclusion, even though the law designed to protect individuals they ask for sacrifice of other people. This is evident in the fact that the
US of the developed countries has one of the highest rates of suicides, murders, and crimes caused by guns. Due to the law, American can have gun easier than other country; however,
America is still dangerous place. This is not only problem for American. Korean also should concern our citizens who are live in
America. We must remember that our citizen can be one of victims from gun accidents. Also, it is important that our citizen can be a criminal. Also, the recent gun case at Virginia Tech has shown that we could be not only victims but also criminals. We should keep in mind the fact that each of small guns could rid many people of their lives. That’s why we are opposed to the individual ownership and use of guns.

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  • 1    Haesung, Jin // Nov 29, 2007 at 7:06 pm

    Bona, we think that you have a good essay structure.
    You have a good thesis statement.
    Even if you didn’t write complete essay, you did good job until now.
    However, we think you need more specific background in the body.

    Good luck!

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