Global warming has come to us as the most severe environment problem that we have to solve today. Global warming is caused by air and environmental pollution, which makes the heat from the sun unable to get out of earth’s atmosphere, and makes earth hotter and hotter. The Warming Gases are the biggest reason that causes Global Warming. The most well-known Warming Gas is carbon dioxide, and its amount has been increasing with modernization of human society. The damages caused by Global Warming are changing ecosystem, melting glaciers, and Smog. Those are all connected with our human life directly. The solutions of the Global Warming can be recycling resources, protecting environment, and using cars less.
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September 25th, 2007 · 5 Comments
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Carol
// Sep 25, 2007 at 7:22 pm
I think the topic you wrote about is a good one. In your paragraph, you had already mentioned about your three subtopics, which will be easy for you to expand your body paragraph.
Keep working on it and enjoy your writing.:)
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Steve
// Sep 25, 2007 at 9:47 pm
I like your topic. You have good information about both causes and effects. I’m wondering if you can write an essay on it without using outside sources because it is a rather technical topic.
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goni7
// Sep 27, 2007 at 2:39 pm
Bona,
Hello~ I wanted to write this topic, but I have to find some information about causing of global warming, and I think I need to write some sources where I found the information, so I did not choose the topic. hehe.
but, I like your paragraph. *^^*
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mayanjie
// Sep 27, 2007 at 3:55 pm
it’s good, but i am not sure you can write it without outside sources.
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mike
// Oct 2, 2007 at 4:03 pm
your topic is interesting. But i concern that you can write cause & effect writing without outsources. Anyway, your prewriting is well done..
Good luck with Essay~hahaha
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