Evelyn’s

Today, gun is one of the methods for self defense but many crimes by guns have been occurred. Because of many different reasons people who live in
U.S. buy guns easily. Some people say that owning gun is kind of right problem and the other people say that gun should be controlled by strong law of government. Then, how become is it controversy topic as decide president or senator. Sometimes, gun control topic used to be an election pledge and it still face up. Having guns is an old culture of
U.S. Even half percentage of adult men has guns in their homes. Some people say having a gun is right for protecting them selves. Though people know it is a serious problem that many people have guns. Also U.S. has a high rate of murder which is more than 2 times of
Korea, There are a lot of conflicts between students and they murder. In
Korea, we have many fights but not murder. And most suicide is from guns in U.S. Guns make people’s heart vicious. I think guns are calling blood. I do not think guns don’t have any good affects on people. U.S. should not allow owning guns, so
U.S. students can be safe. I convince that gun should be controlled by strict law because of four reasons that it leads to decrease many kinds of crimes by gun, stop gun accidents, prevent using gun in wrong hand, and gun is kind of very dangerous weapon.First, opponents claim that gun is the best method to protect them. It is very easy to use and small enough to carry; moreover it can kill people by just fingertip. However, we should think that the gun which can kill people easily can be owned by criminals. Even though people want to own the gun to protect them, it can give better chance and motive to criminal. It is obvious that criminals want to use gun to their crime as much as people who want to protect them. According to blahblah, the countries which allow owning gun have higher crime rate. Therefore, owning gun should be illegal and controlled except police man whose job is protecting people.Secondly, many people who believe that gun control should be abolished think that using gun is not that hard so people can use them with little careful. However, let’s think that how police men learn and practice a lot before they are using real gun. To be a police man, they need to familiar with gun from practice and know exact methods before using. Also, the rate of fatal gun accident from children is skyrocketed in
United States. From these example, people who think that gun is easy to use is quite wrong indiscreet use of gun causes fatal gun accident involving children. Accident causes include children playing with guns and negligent manufacturing.Third, guns can be used in the wrong hands.Fourth, Guns are so complex that special training is necessary to use them properly.In my conclusion, even though the law designed to protect individuals they ask for sacrifice of other people. This is evident in the fact that the
US of the developed countries has one of the highest rates of suicides, murders, and crimes caused by guns. Due to the law, American can have gun easier than other country; however,
America is still dangerous place. This is not only problem for American. Korean also should concern our citizens who are live in
America. We must remember that our citizen can be one of victims from gun accidents. Also, it is important that our citizen can be a criminal. Also, the recent gun case at Virginia Tech has shown that we could be not only victims but also criminals. We should keep in mind the fact that each of small guns could rid many people of their lives. That’s why we are opposed to the individual ownership and use of guns.

I have written 2 essays for 1 month. There were Logical Division and Cause/effect. I learned that some topics are better to be divided by logical division essays and some topics are better to be divided by cause/effect essays. However, I have a problem how do I arrange them which are my ideas of brainstorming in my essay. Both logical division and cause/effect essay are difficult to me, they have very different format though. And I know that getting closer to conclusion, my paragraphs getting out of the main idea. I recognize it is my big problem and also it is the hardest thing I can not solve.

These days global environmental pollution is draw to our life very closely because it is related devastating of ecosystem directly. Also, destroyed ecosystem causes many problems such as lack of water and oxygen, extinction of life, abnormal weather. Those problems effect to human life immediately; for example, human cannot live without water and oxygen, and extinct of life can bring no food, and unusual weather makes strange phenomenon like global warming. Above all things I mentioned, I am going to focus on Global warming which can makes people suffer from disasters such as drought, flood, and typhoon. Global warming has come to us as the most severe environment problem that we have to solve today.

        Global warming is caused by air and environmental pollution, which makes the heat from the sun unable to get out of earth’s atmosphere, and makes earth hotter and hotter. The Warming Gases are the biggest reason that causes Global Warming. The most well-known Warming Gas is carbon dioxide, and its amount has been increasing with modernization of human society. Then, who make the Warming Gas? The answer is human. Actually, human’s industrialization have been making a Warming Gases.

Global warming has come to us as the most severe environment problem that we have to solve today. Global warming is caused by air and environmental pollution, which makes the heat from the sun unable to get out of earth’s atmosphere, and makes earth hotter and hotter. The Warming Gases are the biggest reason that causes Global Warming. The most well-known Warming Gas is carbon dioxide, and its amount has been increasing with modernization of human society. The damages caused by Global Warming are changing ecosystem, melting glaciers, and Smog. Those are all connected with our human life directly. The solutions of the Global Warming can be recycling resources, protecting environment, and using cars less.

The first time, when I came here, I have learned about how to write paragraph using contrast and comparison in level 2. The topics were about introducing culture of my country, superstiton, foods, education, and so on. It was kind of interesting topic. And I learned quotation and essay including introduction, thesis statement, body, and conclusion in level 3. I think introduction is the most difficult. Indicating my opinion clearly is very difficult to me. Because usually the main point of essay is placed in last paragraph in my country. Showing my main idea in thesis is the weakest part to me.

I have learned about how to write a essay while 7 months. However, I think my experience is not enough. Sometimes I did well, but sometimes I did terribly. I want to learn more skills how to write essay according to structure. The most important thing is showing my main topic in thesis and introduction. And that is the weakest part in my essay.

I really enjoy writing in my native language, which is Korean. Actually I like reading a literature book and writing my thinking. That is also why I choose my major which is English Literature. Sometimes, writing my thinking on the whatever paper, it makes me comfortable, and relaxing me. So, I write diary daily in my native language, and write a letter to my family and friends.

I have kept a diary since i was young. In Korea, keeping a diary is a duty as a student from elementary school. That is a one of ther writing homework. Sometimes the homework used to come to me stressful. However, now I like keeping a diary. Every year January, I buy a new pretty diary and I also have a diary on the internet hompage. It can be a method that can introducing me detaily like who am I, what do I think.